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Written by Kay, on 22-03-2008 21:44
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He ran from the small town,
At an extremely fast pace.
Beads of sweat now trailing down,
His twitching and agonized face.

He sprinted towards the woods,
He had to get away.
Going as fast as he could,
For now he could not stay.

Now he's deep in this forest,
Alone and afraid.
Having to run even from his dearest,
A forced decision that was made.

He looked in the sky,
In the black blanket it rose.
The lunar orb that sat so high,
For the changing will occure he knows.

He has no worries now,
He's sure not to harm anyone.
He must try to stay away from town,
In the woods awaiting the sun.

Now here comes the changing,
His body is forced to switching.
Oh how badly he must be aching,
And how awfully his body is twitching.

He shakes his head violently,
And their's a hint of a snout.
Bearing fangs so venomously,
He know's this can't be fought.

His human skin,
Now gone and deserted.
His body no longer thin,
And his human mind inverted.

His hands now hold portruding claws,
No longer safe to touch anyone.
His face now shadowed with a wolf-like jaw,
No longer filled with joy and fun.

He rampages through the trees,
From his mouth escaping growls.
In the distance a far off cliff he sees,
And to the full moon he howls.





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Posted by Poetryismylife, on 06-04-2009 03:14, IP 86.171.90.218, Registered
1. Wow!, amazing!
The description in this poem and the way it is written out is simply fantastic! You should be proud! :grin
 
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Posted by DShammoulton88, on 05-02-2009 13:52, IP 68.238.144.26, Registered
2. Yes
I think the fact that someone took the creative energy to write a werewolf poem is what fills me with joy. The last stanza is a great way to cap of the poem. What a write, what a writter. Great work!
 
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Posted by Thunder, on 02-01-2009 20:20, IP 98.28.48.156, Registered
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This was an interesting write and I enjoyed reading it. I did have problems with the flow on one of the stanza's but all in all, I liked it.
 
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Posted by XFire, on 28-12-2008 19:47, IP 82.28.58.92, Registered
4. great
i thought this was amazing, very nice rhyming and story told within the piece with very good descriptions as well of the transformation as well! 8)
 
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Posted by Lee, on 10-11-2008 22:38, IP 72.33.75.112, Registered
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I like how the sympathy of the poem changes through the transformation. It definitely changed the tone of the poem effectively.
 
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