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Written by half penny
hey
wow. this spoke to me, on many levels. i feel the same alot of the times. this certain strain that's constant about what to d
Written by razor
i honestly...
want your views on this. i`ve only been in med school for a week and already the work is making me feel as though i want some
Written by intention
hey Ina
thanks for reading and commenting...i figure i'll be one those guys who writes poetry after breakups. :)
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Written by half penny
wow!
i loved this. not only does it serve the purpose that you set out to give it, but could be also seen as an explanation/explor
Written by Dark Peace
......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...and another thing, what happened to the image i submitted? all i see is the word image! baaaaahhg!! :sigh
Written by Dark Peace
BROKEN FORMAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
author's note: i apologize for the bad formatting. it's not how i intended it to look!!! webmaster really needs to fix this.
Written by half penny
Ah you're back
i'm glad i see you writing like, you'd do it all again. i love that line. i also like how you compared a relationship with a
Written by Thunder
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i picture a person growing old and having alzheimers with this write. i can feel the sadness and empathy for this person yo
Written by ammo323
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it was really short but i liked.. how it was put together especially 'you were never a monster don't pretend to be' that
Written by half penny
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i like this. it's got a tone of responsibility along with nostalgia and of course, the long for love. that's cool, keep writi
Written by ammo323
Ooops.
i didn't realize what the intro meant.. that's why it's repeated.. hah..
Written by Fish
hm..
if this was intentional, i like it! not to sound pretentiously artsy or anything, but it conveys a feeling of emptiness and n
Written by Fish
nice!
i was pleasantly surprised! it was good! i really like your style of guitar playing.
Written by bloodmagician
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to view the harmony of life and stand still. to love thy self and know thy will. then place yourself, forev
Written by stabby
thanks 4 the comment
fiction?no i only wish it was.
Written by razor
Scary
but very expressive. i really get drawn into your poems, but your latest is so long!! i`ll read that when i`m not looking for
Written by razor
hmmm
sounds like a bad crash. i feel a little sad when i read this and i honestly don`t know what to say. sometimes i feel to give
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I cant lay my cards on the table
because you've always been good at
manipulation
I pick up the pieces
and complete your cryptic jigsaw,
tape it all together
put it on display for your eyes
only to be told
my dark result is wrong
but the pieces fit
You say you want it, you want it, you want it
you get it , you have it, you got it
you dont act like you want it
but still you get it , you still have it, you still got it
Back to your deliberate confrontation,
your ideal situation
Why wont you let me go
when you know I know
why do you treat me so
when you know you know
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