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Change In Mood Has Made Me Shrewd

Written by mvvenkataraman, on 14-02-2010 08:22

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Severest dejection I possess now I want to overcome it somehow So I to write a poem I choose Hoping optimism it will produce Here and there I look No poetry I could cook Home is in a shabby condition With things in a bad fashion To my wife my sorrow I sadly report To a site she wanted me to resort The site is now opened by me I am now in a writing spree one hundred hits one poem has Surely I am not a very dull ass Someone is with kindness reading Even my words, they are needing What a generous heart they hold! Slowly I am becoming very bold Cheer up, to my heart, my brains says Surely to be jolly there are ways My sorrow gradually vanishes My boredom slowly diminishes I decide to feel optimistically And my ennui is gone magically All my noble thoughts I pool And my heart is made very cool I plan to only positively feel This decision will surely heal Life is for a very short time Feeling dejected is a crime I must bring in my home order Hard-working I must consider I must make the house neat and clean It must be made to get a Divine scene I must never take time to worry As it will make me feel sorry If I lose myself in doing duties I can find out all life’s beauties This life is absolutely precious Jolly mood is really delicious M V VENKATARAMAN Sorrow was hugging, I was going on begging, My heart, worry was digging, My life gloom was dragging, I decided to overcome, To bring a positive outcome, Now change in mood has come, As a result joyful I have become. M V VENKATARAMAN

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Posted by Shatfield, on 17-02-2010 17:25, IP 81.152.231.42, Registered

1. Bla

Err yeah. I think I did one like this. But it was pretty crap. I got bored halfway through trying to figure out a pattern in my head. But I shouldn't have to.

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Posted by Half Penny, on 14-02-2010 16:05, IP 75.22.133.113, Registered

2. translated?

first of all, this looks like it's gone through a translator engine...which makes it less appealing for the reader to finish reading it once they are sick of the improper english committed. but secondly, i do understand the need and effort to make one's poetry accessible to as many people as possible, but i'm sure your poem sounds more attractive in whatever original language it is and could never reach the same level of perception in english. so while the essence may not be completely lost, the art is.