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Posted on Wednesday, October 31 @ 23:44:25 EDT
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"over and over" by ximradletshuggx
I can't believe what you just said,
I keep playing it over in my head.
I thought that we would last forever,
I guess forevers last like nevers.
I thought I still loved you when you broke my heart,
I thought it would hurt, us being apart.
I only cried for a second or two,
Then I realized that I was actually over you.
I keep thinking of all the good times we had,
how we'd make up when we got mad.
I want to say that I miss you still,
but baby I don't think that I will.
You want to forget me that's okay
Just to let you know I've found another way.
I found another just like you,
he makes me fell the way that you used to.
He's really great in every way,
there's not really much left to say.
I hope that youre happy without me around,
and I hope one day that our friendship will be found.
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