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Posted on Wednesday, October 31 @ 23:41:51 EDT
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"Poetry: Dear You" by Ang
Dear You,
The love of my life,
You are as sweet as can be,
I love you so much,
And you love me.
I think about you in the morning,
I dream of you at night.
You are my heart,
And you are my soul.
You are the arms that warm me,
When I'm cold.
I love being near you,
I love seeing your face.
The light in your eyes flickers,
At such an elegant pace.
Your eyes are clear and blue,
Like the water in the ocean.
Your hair is so soft and perfect,
Your body is distinct and built.
I love to caress your soft, tan skin.
Your touch is soothing to my soul.
I love you more than anything,
You take my breath away,
And give me yours.
When we kiss, you become the other half of me.
I love it when you hold me,
I love being your girl,
I love it when you say you miss me,
And tell me I'm your world.
I want to spend my life with you,
And live out my dreams with you.
We can do it if we try,
We could have everything we've ever wanted
Our dream jobs, children, a beautiful home...and my favorite part,
Sleep by each other every night,
Our hearts beating as one.
I will give you everything I have,
You are my life.
I love you.
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