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"Poetry: JUST A SMILE" by livingpassio

In the hour of my painful pleasure
When frustration juxtaposed my hands
Even when I trudge through the street
Through the rabbles and itching of the night
When the house plates cry and weep
For the moment of pressurizing
Yet, mine heart ponder in thought when I lie within my bed
Within my bed of discomforted
Buried in mood and scotched in head
When thou feeble and senile and healthy smile truncated
When famine gripped my stomach
Hard word coarsen my lips
Let dark cloud give way to light
And blue skies glimpsed by
Smiles aglow and breathe a refresher
My flowers bloom again and future unfolds grasses are evergreen
And sun is raising high for you
Just for you to smile

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Re: JUST A SMILE (Score: 1)
by themaestro on 8 Nov 2007
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Its hard to read, because of the style, not really flowing, well (for me anyway)

Re: JUST A SMILE (Score: 1)
by pygmalion on 29 Dec 2007
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Enjoyed the

rabbles and itching of the night

image!

Re: JUST A SMILE (Score: 1)
by forevertaintedsoul on 20 Jan 2008
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I didn't get it

and I don't think others get it either...

Re: JUST A SMILE (Score: 1)
by SaintOfTheDark on 21 Jan 2008
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i loved it

Re: JUST A SMILE (Score: 1)
by masochistic-lioness on 12 Apr 2008
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hmm...I'm not really sure if it flowed all that well but maybe thats just me.I think you have talent though.

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